Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 15, 2020
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Hi Micah,
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Micah, you are very helpful feeding the rabbit. Do you do this everyday now? We all have to help out in families. What does your rabbit look like?
I like the way you are listening to sounds to write your words.
Mrs Roach
Mrs Roach
we take turns feeding her. she is big and brown. An like cinnamon colour, her name is cinnamon.
DeleteHi Micah,
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely story you have written about having to look after your rabbit. What food do you feed to your rabbit? What is your rabbits name?
we fed her rabbit pellets. her name is cinnamon.
DeleteHi Micah
ReplyDeleteGreat job looking after your rabbit. I love the picture you drew to go with your writing. Your rabbit looks very happy, does it have a name? I like that you tried hard to put the fullstops into your sentences.
Rachel
yes her name is cinnamon.
DeleteI have 2 rabbits now
ReplyDeletewhat do they look like? what are there names?
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