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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

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8 comments:

  1. Hi Micah,
    Great writing Micah, you are very helpful feeding the rabbit. Do you do this everyday now? We all have to help out in families. What does your rabbit look like?
    I like the way you are listening to sounds to write your words.
    Mrs Roach
    Mrs Roach

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    1. we take turns feeding her. she is big and brown. An like cinnamon colour, her name is cinnamon.

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  2. Hi Micah,

    What a lovely story you have written about having to look after your rabbit. What food do you feed to your rabbit? What is your rabbits name?

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    1. we fed her rabbit pellets. her name is cinnamon.

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  3. Hi Micah
    Great job looking after your rabbit. I love the picture you drew to go with your writing. Your rabbit looks very happy, does it have a name? I like that you tried hard to put the fullstops into your sentences.
    Rachel

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  4. I have 2 rabbits now

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  5. what do they look like? what are there names?

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