I have been learning how to make a good comment on a blog.
I like it when I get a good comment. Do you?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
I have been learning how to make a good comment on a blog.
We have been learning about God's creation and that it is holy because God made it. I can look after God's creation by:
Respecting the environment
By picking up litter and planting trees and plants.
Daniel and I have been writing a story about the two Brave Knights. We hope you enjoy it!
Title: Pebbles the cat
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Pebbles escaped from the lounge. ....
He slowly creeped into Micah’s room. He saw a clean fresh and cold made bed and toys all over the floor like a jungle mess even under the bed! Under the bed Pebbles made the flax of leaves hut out of toys. ......Suddenly Pebbles heard huge loud giant footsteps coming down the hallway towards the bedroom. It was Micah of course! Pebbles quickly hid in Micahs wardrobe. Hiding in the the clothes from Micah, the cat was scared and didnt want to be found because he was playing hide and seek. Micah cleaned up his toys because the clock said it was lunchtime and the cat needed to be fed. There was cake in Micah's room it smelled like strawberry cake perfume. Pebbles could smell it. Micah ate the cake and it tasted delicious yummy ice-cream strawberry. Pebbles really wanted to eat it but he didn't as he knew he would be found. So he felt sad and hungry poor Pebbles his tummy rumbled. He sadly opened the wardrobe door and meowed loudly so that Micah could hear him. Micah came quickly to his room and cuddled pebbles saying its ok pebbles i will give you some food, Micah stroked the cat happily ate his cat food.
The end..
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What can you hear?
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Roar
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What can you see?
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Sharp Tewth
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What can you feel?
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Scared, sharp claws
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What can you smell?
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Stinky breath
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What can you taste?
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swet
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Title: The zoo keeper of tiger
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One day there was a zookeeper and a tiger. The tiger roared at the zookeeper .
The zookeeper smelt his stinky breath eww said the zookeeper then the tiger jumped up and put out his sharp claws on the zookeeper. The zookeeper was scared but he pulled out his gun but then the tiger listened so he did not shoot him. The tiger opened his mouth the zookeeper sat down and feed the tiger. The zookeeper he saw very sharp teeth then the zookeeper looked and they were pointy. After that the zookeeper put the tiger back in his cage. Then the zookeeper walked away. He was sweating because it was a hot day.
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