Stephanie's ponytail
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, May 8, 2020
stephanie's ponytail
Stephanie's ponytail
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Hi Micah,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great colourful and informative poster you have made about Stephaine. Her ponytail is beautiful. She was very determined that's for sure. I think she also wanted to be different from everyone else and got frustrated when they started copying her.
A very good job on drawing Stephaine. You have really made a point of her ponytail, this shows you understood the story. Well done Micah.
Have you ever felt like Stephanie?
thankyou for your comment. i want to be myself and not like everone else i like myself i like lego
DeleteHi Micah,
ReplyDeleteYou look very proud of your work in the photo and so you should be. You have made some very good points. Stephanie was grumpy. proud, and smart.
I'm glad you liked the book.
Mrs Ferguson
thanku
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