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Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, May 8, 2020
The zookeeper
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Hi Micah,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great piece of writing from you. You really have used some well thought out adjectives to explain the senses. Things like tasting sweat, because of his sweating shows you understood the task, well done.
Would you like to be that Zookeeper?
yes! My sister and mum helped me write this and complete this to help me understand :)
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